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Bloody Love (by Omar Kamal)...Part.5
Inspector
Leveuf arrived the next day at the police station, and as he entered, he asked
Valerie to follow him to his office room.
“Valerie”
he said; “I want you to call Monsieur Lenoir and Monsieur Dubois, tell them I
want to talk to them, that we have a new twist to the case. Tell one of them to
come here at 10, and the other at one o’clock.”
“What
new twist has come up to the case?” asked Valerie with curiosity.
“None
whatsoever, but let’s see how they react.”
Just
as the inspector requested, at exactly 10 o’clock, Monsieur Lenoir walked into
his office with an expression of anxiety on his face. He sat down, and with
haste asked the inspector to tell him what happened.
“Monsieur
Lenoir, we are about to solve the case of the murder of your wife. We have
found the evidence of where the killer dragged the body into the sewers. It so
happens that the entrance to the sewers he used, a piece of evidence was left
that is crucial to identify him. I’m afraid we could not remove that piece of
evidence from the scene, but we are working on identifying the killer with
that.”
“What
is that piece of evidence?”
“I’m
afraid that information I cannot disclose at the moment. But trust me, once we
arrest the perpetrator, I will let you know all the details.”
Monsieur
Lenoir left the office with a confused expression on his face.
At
one o’clock, Olivier stepped into the inspector’s office as agreed. The
inspector shared the same information with the young man, who also attempted to
find out what piece of evidence was found, but like Monsieur Lenoir before him,
Olivier left the office with a confused face.
The
hours passed as the inspector and Valerie waited by the phone. The night fell
and darkness took over the city. A few minutes after midnight, they got a call
from one of the surveillance patrols appointed to watch the suspects. They
informed the inspector that their target had left the building and that they
were on his trail. Inspector Leveuf and Valerie left with the car immediately
and followed the instructions of the surveillance patrol. A few minutes later,
they arrived at one of the main sewer entrances of the city. In front of the
large metal entrance, they waited and watched. In the darkness, a man
approached the entrance with a flashlight. He slowly started looking around the
entrance carefully in a desperate search to find the piece of evidence that
could incriminate him. Suddenly, a strong light struck his back and illuminated
the scene, a voice behind him yelled; “Monsieur Dubois, surrender yourself, you
are under arrest for the murder of Amelie Lenoir!”
*****
Back
in the police station, Olivier Dubois confessed to the police for the murder.
He explained how that evening, Madame Lenoir came to him as usual and after
having dinner together, Olivier confessed his intense love for her and asked
her to leave her husband and stay with him. She refused saying that she would
never leave her husband for anybody. She told him that their affair is over,
that she would never see him again, and that he should forget her and go on
with his life. The situation went out of hand; as they started quarrelling
harshly, and as she tried to leave, he stopped her, but she resisted. Their
fight became harder and more violent, until the point where he strangled her
with a belt he had laid on the couch. Realising what he had done, he decided to
get rid of the body and distance himself from the crime.
Behind
the window stood Inspector Leveuf, Valerie and Monsieur Lenoir, listening to
the confession. Monsieur Lenoir looked down to the floor when the young man had
stopped talking, he then looked up to the inspector and said; “Thank you
inspector Leveuf for your help.”
The
inspector put his hand over the man’s shoulder, and with a supportive smile
said; “I am merely doing my job. I am very sorry for your loss.”
Monsieur
Lenoir turned around and left the police station, with a heavy walk and sorrow
on his face.
Inspector
Leveuf and Valerie stood as they watched the man leave the station. The
inspector lit a cigarette and went back to his office.
THE END
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May 12, 2013
Bloody Love (by Omar Kamal)...Part.4
Inspector
Leveuf and Valerie arrived to the building where the owner of the second number
lives. They searched for the bell of a young man named Olivier Dubois. Olivier
was a young man of 29 years of age; he worked as a professional dancer and a
teacher at the dance school where Madame Lenoir attended. The inspector rang on
the bell of the young man, a male voice answered;
“Hello.”
The
inspector answered back saying; “Hello Monsieur Dubois, this is inspector
Leveuf and Mademoiselle Carion from the police. Could you please let us in, we
have a few questions to ask you regarding Madame Lenoir.”
“Ah
yes!” replied Olivier; “I was expecting you guys would come sooner or later,
please come in, I’m on the third floor.”
The
inspector and Valerie walked up the third floor, there they found a young
handsome man, with shoulder long curly brown hair, an unshaved beard, perfectly
fit body, white fair skin and crystal blue eyes, waiting for them at the
entrance of his apartment.
“Please
come in” said Olivier with a calm voice.
They
walked into the apartment; it was a small apartment with one bedroom, a living
room and a separate kitchen corner with a bar opening on the living room. On
the walls were hanged paintings of dancers, pictures of Paris and New York, a
few old pictures of people, possibly family members, and a tribal African mask,
just above the television.
“Can
I offer you something to drink?” asked Olivier with a calm and stable voice.
“Thank
you Monsieur Dubois, I would rather get directly to business.” Said the
inspector; “You said you were expecting us. Why is that?”
Olivier
smiled, and as he sat down on the couch he said; “Well, I knew that sooner or
later you would find out that I have a connection with Amelie, and you would
surely come to understand better this connection. It’s such a great loss; she
was such an amazing woman. Whoever did this should get the worse punishment possible.
Please inspector, Mademoiselle, have a seat.”
Inspector
Leveuf sat down and said calmly; “Well, I suppose this makes our job easier, we
can skip the introduction of the case and why we are here, since you obviously
know this already. So let me get to the first question. What is your connection
with Amelie Lenoir?”
Olivier
smiled again and replied; “Isn’t it obvious? I was her lover.”
A
silence reigned in the room. Valerie’s face had an expression of surprise; she
couldn’t believe how calm and straight forward the young man was. The inspector
on the other hand; seemed to appreciate this.
“Could
you please tell us Monsieur Dubois how exactly you met with Madame Lenoir and
how your affair started?” asked the inspector.
“It
was about four months ago when I first met Amelie at the dance school. I was
giving lessons at that time, at the same time slot as she had her classes. I
met her one day as we left the school; she seemed to be somewhat stressed,
waiting outside the building. I asked her if everything is alright, and she
explained that her husband was supposed to pick her up, but he had just called
saying he cannot make it as he is feeling sick, and she should find a way to
get home. So I offered her a ride with my car. We met in the hallways several times
after that and talked, and one day I invited her to go out for dinner after the
lesson, and we did. Things then evolved from there.”
“Did
you continue giving the same lessons after your affair started?” asked the
inspector.
“No,
I requested a change of time slot, so I could give the lessons before her
class, so that way she could come to me during the time that she would normally
have a class. It seemed the best way to meet and have our private time.”
“Did
you have any fights or any type of disagreement in the past months since your
affair started?”
“No,
never. The time we spent together was for our pleasure and happiness. I loved
her and she loved me. We didn’t want to spoil what we had, I wanted to get her
out of the misery she had in her marriage, so I would never allow myself to
argue with her about anything.”
“What
makes you so sure she loved you? I mean after all, she was a happily married
woman.”
“She
loved me; I knew it, because she said it and I could see it in her behaviour.
And she was not a happily married woman. All the feelings in her married life
had gone dry; her husband didn’t care for her or what was happening in her
life, so naturally she lost the love she had for him.”
“Have
you ever considered that maybe she was in need of some source of affection and
care, and you seemed to be the perfect candidate, but that at the end of the
day, she still held on to her husband. That you basically were just a tool to
fill her emotional vacuum?”
Olivier’s
face lost the hidden smile, and anger seemed to rise in his eyes as he replied;
“She loved me I’m telling you! She was planning to leave her husband for me!
That’s why she was killed!”
“What
do you mean?” asked the inspector.
“Well,
isn’t it obvious? Her husband found out about us, he knew she was about to
leave him for me, for her true love, for true happiness, and he couldn’t handle
it. So he killed her in this horrific way!”
“That
is quite a serious accusation Monsieur Dubois.” said Valerie.
“It
is the truth, it makes sense and you know it!” replied Olivier with an
emotional voice.
“What
we know Monsieur Dubois.” Said the inspector calmly; “Is that a woman was
brutally murdered. The question as to who did it, will be determined through
our investigation. Now please tell us what happened between you two on the
night she disappeared?”
“Nothing;
she didn’t actually come to see me that night at all. I waited for her and
around 9PM I tried to call her several times, but got no answer from her.”
“What
did you do during that time when you waited?”
“I
just stayed home. Made dinner for two, as I thought she would come, even if a
bit late. I had my dinner a bit after 9PM, and then went to bed by midnight.”
“Why
did you not contact the police the next day when she didn’t show up and didn’t
answer your calls?”
“Well,
I thought that maybe she had some issue with her husband and couldn’t come or
answer me. And even if I would have wanted to contact the police, I could have
never done it, otherwise I would raise the suspicion in her husband, he would
wonder who I am and why I am looking for her, then she would definitely be in
danger.”
“What
did you have or dinner on that day Monsieur Dubois?” asked the inspector.
“Excuse
me?” Reacted Olivier with a surprise.
“On
the evening of Madame Le noir’s disappearance, what did you have for dinner?”
“I
don’t remember, it must have been something quick and simple, pasta maybe or
rice.”
“You
must have made something more interesting, no? After all, you met her only once
a week. I would definitely make something special then for the evening. Not to
mention that you cooked for two people, so the food must have remained for the
next day as well, no?” asked Inspector Leveuf with a somewhat friendly tone.
Olivier
scratched his head as he struggled to remember, and in a moment of inspiration
he reacted; “Ah yes, now I remember! I believe I made some rice with chicken
curry and a hummus on the side.”
The
inspector smiled and said; “Ah, there we go, now that sounds special.”
A
few minutes later, the inspector and Valerie thanks the young man for his time
as they left the apartment, and promised to inform him of any updates they will
reach in the investigation.
As
they walked out the building, inspector Leveuf looked at Valerie and told her;
“Get me two surveillance patrols on the houses of Monsieur Lenoir and Lonsieur
Dubois. I want them to watch their every single move, until I order otherwise.”
“Consider
it done inspector.”
That
evening, inspector Leveuf stood in his apartment by the window watching out on
the city as he smoked his last cigarette of the day. He struggled with his mind
to think who could be the murder of poor Madame Lenoir. He knew that one of the
two men must have done it. They were the only ones who would have the motif to
kill her, but both had an alibi so trivial, it must be true. Neither of them
could prove he was home at the time of the murder, but no evidence was there to
prove the opposite. He had to find a way to find the truth, to reach it, and
there was one thing he needed for that; a mistake.
*****
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May 11, 2013
Bloody Love (by Omar Kamal)...Part.3
“Good
morning inspector. We just received the autopsy report” said Valerie as she
entered Inspector Leveuf’s office with the report in her hand. “Oh, and
inspector, Monsieur Lenoir is waiting outside. Shall I let him in?”
“Yes
please Valerie, show him in.” replied the inspector. “And please also get in
contact with the mobile phone providers; try to find out who is the owner of
the second number that was trying to call Madame Lenoir.”
“Of
course, sir.”
Monsieur
Lenoir walked into the room; on his face the traces of exhaustion and sorrow
were visible, as if he had not slept the whole night long. His eye lids were dark
and baggy, his eyes were red and watery, his footsteps slow and heavy, his back
was leaning forward, his beard unshaved and his arms were hanging by his side
as if he was carrying a heavy load. With a low and deep voice he said; “Good
morning inspector.”
“Good
morning Monsieur Lenoir. Please have a seat. Shall I get you anything to drink;
tea or coffee maybe?”
“I
could have a coffee, thank you inspector.”
Inspector
Leveuf asked for a coffee, and while they waited for the drink, he rolled a
cigarette as the silence reigned on the room.
The
coffee arrived, monsieur Lenoir started sipping on his drink while the
inspector lit his cigarette. He took a deep breath, and as he exhaled, he said;
“As
you know Monsieur Lenoir, this case is no longer the search for a missing
person, but it is now a murder case. I have here the results of the autopsy,
and it shows that your wife was strangled to death, probably with the use of a
belt. As nothing has been stolen from here, we are right now assuming that this
murder is linked to some kind of personal vengeance between your wife and the
murder. Do you know of anybody who might have a grudge against your wife, or
who would have the motive to get rid of her?”
“Absolutely
not! My wife had no enemies; she had no reason to have enemies. Her life was
simple and peaceful, and everybody loved her!” said Monsieur Lenoir with an
upset tone.
“Then
who would have an interest in having your wife dead?”
“I
don’t know, I cannot imagine anybody would want to kill her!”
“How did your wife go to her dance lessons?
Did you drive her there?”
“No;
she usually went on her own.”
“Have
you proposed to drive her to or from her dance lessons in the past months?”
“I
never proposed to drive her to the dance lessons, because I always got home
from work either just before she left for the lesson, or after she had already
left. I did however propose a few times to pick her up once she was done with
the lesson and even to take her out for dinner after it.”
“What
was her reaction to this proposal?”
“In
the past months, she would refuse, always politely.”
“What
did she say exactly?”
“She
would either tell me to relax because I had a long day at work, or she would
tell me that it’s her night out with the ladies, and that they would have a girl
time and girl talk.”
“How
did you react to that?”
“I
respected her personal space and her choice to spend time with her friends.”
Inspector
Leveuf took a last breath of his cigarette and put it off in the ashtray next
to him. He looked deeply towards Monsieur Lenoir and said;
“Monsieur
Lenoir, did you know that your wife has not been to her dance lessons for
several months?”
Monsieur
Lenoir looked surprised and with a hesitant voice said; “No, I had no idea, why
wouldn’t she? And where was she going all this time then?”
“That’s
why I would like you to tell me.”
“As
I said, I have no idea of that. I have always thought she was going to the
dance lessons and after that going out with her friends from the lesson for
dinner or a drink, as she always said.”
“As
I mentioned previously, we’ve found out from her dance school that she hasn’t
been there for several months now, not a single time. Have you ever considered
or noticed any indication that she might be cheating on you with a lover?”
“No!
I cannot imagine her ever doing that.” replied Monsieur Lenoir with an
emotional voice.
“Was
there, in any situation, the name of any guy mentioned in the past few months that
you did not know, or had not heard his name before?”
“No,
none; all the people she knew and talked to, I knew them and had met them at
least once before on different occasions.”
“Monsieur
Lenoir” said the inspector with a deep and serious voice, “where were you on the
night your wife disappeared between 9PM and 11PM?”
“I
was home.”
“Were
you with anybody or is there anybody who could support what you say?”
Monsieur
Lenoir looked shocked at the question, and with an aggressive tone replied; “I
was alone at home, so no, nobody can support my words! But I did not kill my
wife, if that is what you are trying to find out!”
“This
is a murder case Monsieur Lenoir, and we must investigate all the
possibilities. What time did you arrive home exactly on that day?”
“A
bit before half past six”
“So
you saw your wife before she left?”
“Yes,
I did.”
“Did
you talk?”
“Yes,
we did.”
“Can
you recall the conversation?”
“She
asked me how my day was. I said it was a very busy day but productive. She then
told me that dinner is ready and I can heat it up in the microwave. Then she
kissed me and left.”
“What
did you do after that?”
“I
changed, washed, heated up the meal and sat in front of the television. I
watched a movie while eating.”
“What
did you have for dinner?”
“Excuse
me?” replied Monsieur Lenoir with utter surprise at the question.
“What
was the meal you had? Can you remember?”
Monsieur
Lenoir struggled to remember and then said; “I had beans with white rice and
chicken breasts. No sorry, it was green Pease, not beans”
“What
did you watch?”
Monsieur
Lenoir looked nervous, he stared at the inspector and said; “What has that got
to do with the murder of my wife!?”
Inspector
Leveuf smiled and said “I am trying to draw the evening’s events so we can
understand better what happened. So, what movie did you watch?”
“I
watched Kill Bill.”
“Ah,
interesting movie; quite long, and bloody, no?”
Monsieur
Lenoir had a sarcastic smile on his face and said; “Yes, it’s about three hours
long, very bloody, but I do enjoy Tarantino movies.”
“What
time did the movie end?”
“Around
10PM.”
“And
what did you do after that?”
“I
went to sleep. I worked the next day from 8AM, so I needed to rest.”
“Very
well Monsieur Lenoir, thank you for coming. I will let you know if we need any
further information from you.”
Monsieur
Lenoir walked out the inspector’s office and Valerie walked in right after he
left.
“So
how did it go? You think he did it?” asked Valerie with excitement in her
voice.
“Difficult
to say; he seemed surprised at the fact that his wife had not been to the dance
lessons in the past months. He also claimed that there was no indication that
she cheated on him and he had no such suspicions.”
“You
think he is saying the truth?”
“I
don’t know. It’s still not clear in my mind.”
“Did
he tell you where he was at the time of death?” asked Valerie.
“He
was home. He arrived home before half past six, talked to his voice about his
day and the dinner she made for him. She left, and he then changed, had dinner
while watching Kill Bill, then went to bed after the movie, which ended around
10PM.”
“Yes,
I remember that movie was on television two weeks ago, I watched it. Quite
bloody I must say!” Valerie was silent for a moment, then she said; “So then he
was at home.”
“No
necessarily.” Said the Inspector; “he could have easily followed his wife, and
killed her when she left her lover’s home. All he needs is to know what movies
were on that evening, and what was prepared for dinner, and then he can make up
the story to cover up his crime.”
Valerie
thought for a moment about the inspector’s theory, then she handed him a paper
and said; “those are the details of the owner of the second number.”
*****
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