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May 14, 2013
Bloody Love (by Omar Kamal)...Part.5
Inspector
Leveuf arrived the next day at the police station, and as he entered, he asked
Valerie to follow him to his office room.
“Valerie”
he said; “I want you to call Monsieur Lenoir and Monsieur Dubois, tell them I
want to talk to them, that we have a new twist to the case. Tell one of them to
come here at 10, and the other at one o’clock.”
“What
new twist has come up to the case?” asked Valerie with curiosity.
“None
whatsoever, but let’s see how they react.”
Just
as the inspector requested, at exactly 10 o’clock, Monsieur Lenoir walked into
his office with an expression of anxiety on his face. He sat down, and with
haste asked the inspector to tell him what happened.
“Monsieur
Lenoir, we are about to solve the case of the murder of your wife. We have
found the evidence of where the killer dragged the body into the sewers. It so
happens that the entrance to the sewers he used, a piece of evidence was left
that is crucial to identify him. I’m afraid we could not remove that piece of
evidence from the scene, but we are working on identifying the killer with
that.”
“What
is that piece of evidence?”
“I’m
afraid that information I cannot disclose at the moment. But trust me, once we
arrest the perpetrator, I will let you know all the details.”
Monsieur
Lenoir left the office with a confused expression on his face.
At
one o’clock, Olivier stepped into the inspector’s office as agreed. The
inspector shared the same information with the young man, who also attempted to
find out what piece of evidence was found, but like Monsieur Lenoir before him,
Olivier left the office with a confused face.
The
hours passed as the inspector and Valerie waited by the phone. The night fell
and darkness took over the city. A few minutes after midnight, they got a call
from one of the surveillance patrols appointed to watch the suspects. They
informed the inspector that their target had left the building and that they
were on his trail. Inspector Leveuf and Valerie left with the car immediately
and followed the instructions of the surveillance patrol. A few minutes later,
they arrived at one of the main sewer entrances of the city. In front of the
large metal entrance, they waited and watched. In the darkness, a man
approached the entrance with a flashlight. He slowly started looking around the
entrance carefully in a desperate search to find the piece of evidence that
could incriminate him. Suddenly, a strong light struck his back and illuminated
the scene, a voice behind him yelled; “Monsieur Dubois, surrender yourself, you
are under arrest for the murder of Amelie Lenoir!”
*****
Back
in the police station, Olivier Dubois confessed to the police for the murder.
He explained how that evening, Madame Lenoir came to him as usual and after
having dinner together, Olivier confessed his intense love for her and asked
her to leave her husband and stay with him. She refused saying that she would
never leave her husband for anybody. She told him that their affair is over,
that she would never see him again, and that he should forget her and go on
with his life. The situation went out of hand; as they started quarrelling
harshly, and as she tried to leave, he stopped her, but she resisted. Their
fight became harder and more violent, until the point where he strangled her
with a belt he had laid on the couch. Realising what he had done, he decided to
get rid of the body and distance himself from the crime.
Behind
the window stood Inspector Leveuf, Valerie and Monsieur Lenoir, listening to
the confession. Monsieur Lenoir looked down to the floor when the young man had
stopped talking, he then looked up to the inspector and said; “Thank you
inspector Leveuf for your help.”
The
inspector put his hand over the man’s shoulder, and with a supportive smile
said; “I am merely doing my job. I am very sorry for your loss.”
Monsieur
Lenoir turned around and left the police station, with a heavy walk and sorrow
on his face.
Inspector
Leveuf and Valerie stood as they watched the man leave the station. The
inspector lit a cigarette and went back to his office.
THE END
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May 12, 2013
Bloody Love (by Omar Kamal)...Part.4
Inspector
Leveuf and Valerie arrived to the building where the owner of the second number
lives. They searched for the bell of a young man named Olivier Dubois. Olivier
was a young man of 29 years of age; he worked as a professional dancer and a
teacher at the dance school where Madame Lenoir attended. The inspector rang on
the bell of the young man, a male voice answered;
“Hello.”
The
inspector answered back saying; “Hello Monsieur Dubois, this is inspector
Leveuf and Mademoiselle Carion from the police. Could you please let us in, we
have a few questions to ask you regarding Madame Lenoir.”
“Ah
yes!” replied Olivier; “I was expecting you guys would come sooner or later,
please come in, I’m on the third floor.”
The
inspector and Valerie walked up the third floor, there they found a young
handsome man, with shoulder long curly brown hair, an unshaved beard, perfectly
fit body, white fair skin and crystal blue eyes, waiting for them at the
entrance of his apartment.
“Please
come in” said Olivier with a calm voice.
They
walked into the apartment; it was a small apartment with one bedroom, a living
room and a separate kitchen corner with a bar opening on the living room. On
the walls were hanged paintings of dancers, pictures of Paris and New York, a
few old pictures of people, possibly family members, and a tribal African mask,
just above the television.
“Can
I offer you something to drink?” asked Olivier with a calm and stable voice.
“Thank
you Monsieur Dubois, I would rather get directly to business.” Said the
inspector; “You said you were expecting us. Why is that?”
Olivier
smiled, and as he sat down on the couch he said; “Well, I knew that sooner or
later you would find out that I have a connection with Amelie, and you would
surely come to understand better this connection. It’s such a great loss; she
was such an amazing woman. Whoever did this should get the worse punishment possible.
Please inspector, Mademoiselle, have a seat.”
Inspector
Leveuf sat down and said calmly; “Well, I suppose this makes our job easier, we
can skip the introduction of the case and why we are here, since you obviously
know this already. So let me get to the first question. What is your connection
with Amelie Lenoir?”
Olivier
smiled again and replied; “Isn’t it obvious? I was her lover.”
A
silence reigned in the room. Valerie’s face had an expression of surprise; she
couldn’t believe how calm and straight forward the young man was. The inspector
on the other hand; seemed to appreciate this.
“Could
you please tell us Monsieur Dubois how exactly you met with Madame Lenoir and
how your affair started?” asked the inspector.
“It
was about four months ago when I first met Amelie at the dance school. I was
giving lessons at that time, at the same time slot as she had her classes. I
met her one day as we left the school; she seemed to be somewhat stressed,
waiting outside the building. I asked her if everything is alright, and she
explained that her husband was supposed to pick her up, but he had just called
saying he cannot make it as he is feeling sick, and she should find a way to
get home. So I offered her a ride with my car. We met in the hallways several times
after that and talked, and one day I invited her to go out for dinner after the
lesson, and we did. Things then evolved from there.”
“Did
you continue giving the same lessons after your affair started?” asked the
inspector.
“No,
I requested a change of time slot, so I could give the lessons before her
class, so that way she could come to me during the time that she would normally
have a class. It seemed the best way to meet and have our private time.”
“Did
you have any fights or any type of disagreement in the past months since your
affair started?”
“No,
never. The time we spent together was for our pleasure and happiness. I loved
her and she loved me. We didn’t want to spoil what we had, I wanted to get her
out of the misery she had in her marriage, so I would never allow myself to
argue with her about anything.”
“What
makes you so sure she loved you? I mean after all, she was a happily married
woman.”
“She
loved me; I knew it, because she said it and I could see it in her behaviour.
And she was not a happily married woman. All the feelings in her married life
had gone dry; her husband didn’t care for her or what was happening in her
life, so naturally she lost the love she had for him.”
“Have
you ever considered that maybe she was in need of some source of affection and
care, and you seemed to be the perfect candidate, but that at the end of the
day, she still held on to her husband. That you basically were just a tool to
fill her emotional vacuum?”
Olivier’s
face lost the hidden smile, and anger seemed to rise in his eyes as he replied;
“She loved me I’m telling you! She was planning to leave her husband for me!
That’s why she was killed!”
“What
do you mean?” asked the inspector.
“Well,
isn’t it obvious? Her husband found out about us, he knew she was about to
leave him for me, for her true love, for true happiness, and he couldn’t handle
it. So he killed her in this horrific way!”
“That
is quite a serious accusation Monsieur Dubois.” said Valerie.
“It
is the truth, it makes sense and you know it!” replied Olivier with an
emotional voice.
“What
we know Monsieur Dubois.” Said the inspector calmly; “Is that a woman was
brutally murdered. The question as to who did it, will be determined through
our investigation. Now please tell us what happened between you two on the
night she disappeared?”
“Nothing;
she didn’t actually come to see me that night at all. I waited for her and
around 9PM I tried to call her several times, but got no answer from her.”
“What
did you do during that time when you waited?”
“I
just stayed home. Made dinner for two, as I thought she would come, even if a
bit late. I had my dinner a bit after 9PM, and then went to bed by midnight.”
“Why
did you not contact the police the next day when she didn’t show up and didn’t
answer your calls?”
“Well,
I thought that maybe she had some issue with her husband and couldn’t come or
answer me. And even if I would have wanted to contact the police, I could have
never done it, otherwise I would raise the suspicion in her husband, he would
wonder who I am and why I am looking for her, then she would definitely be in
danger.”
“What
did you have or dinner on that day Monsieur Dubois?” asked the inspector.
“Excuse
me?” Reacted Olivier with a surprise.
“On
the evening of Madame Le noir’s disappearance, what did you have for dinner?”
“I
don’t remember, it must have been something quick and simple, pasta maybe or
rice.”
“You
must have made something more interesting, no? After all, you met her only once
a week. I would definitely make something special then for the evening. Not to
mention that you cooked for two people, so the food must have remained for the
next day as well, no?” asked Inspector Leveuf with a somewhat friendly tone.
Olivier
scratched his head as he struggled to remember, and in a moment of inspiration
he reacted; “Ah yes, now I remember! I believe I made some rice with chicken
curry and a hummus on the side.”
The
inspector smiled and said; “Ah, there we go, now that sounds special.”
A
few minutes later, the inspector and Valerie thanks the young man for his time
as they left the apartment, and promised to inform him of any updates they will
reach in the investigation.
As
they walked out the building, inspector Leveuf looked at Valerie and told her;
“Get me two surveillance patrols on the houses of Monsieur Lenoir and Lonsieur
Dubois. I want them to watch their every single move, until I order otherwise.”
“Consider
it done inspector.”
That
evening, inspector Leveuf stood in his apartment by the window watching out on
the city as he smoked his last cigarette of the day. He struggled with his mind
to think who could be the murder of poor Madame Lenoir. He knew that one of the
two men must have done it. They were the only ones who would have the motif to
kill her, but both had an alibi so trivial, it must be true. Neither of them
could prove he was home at the time of the murder, but no evidence was there to
prove the opposite. He had to find a way to find the truth, to reach it, and
there was one thing he needed for that; a mistake.
*****
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May 11, 2013
Bloody Love (by Omar Kamal)...Part.3
“Good
morning inspector. We just received the autopsy report” said Valerie as she
entered Inspector Leveuf’s office with the report in her hand. “Oh, and
inspector, Monsieur Lenoir is waiting outside. Shall I let him in?”
“Yes
please Valerie, show him in.” replied the inspector. “And please also get in
contact with the mobile phone providers; try to find out who is the owner of
the second number that was trying to call Madame Lenoir.”
“Of
course, sir.”
Monsieur
Lenoir walked into the room; on his face the traces of exhaustion and sorrow
were visible, as if he had not slept the whole night long. His eye lids were dark
and baggy, his eyes were red and watery, his footsteps slow and heavy, his back
was leaning forward, his beard unshaved and his arms were hanging by his side
as if he was carrying a heavy load. With a low and deep voice he said; “Good
morning inspector.”
“Good
morning Monsieur Lenoir. Please have a seat. Shall I get you anything to drink;
tea or coffee maybe?”
“I
could have a coffee, thank you inspector.”
Inspector
Leveuf asked for a coffee, and while they waited for the drink, he rolled a
cigarette as the silence reigned on the room.
The
coffee arrived, monsieur Lenoir started sipping on his drink while the
inspector lit his cigarette. He took a deep breath, and as he exhaled, he said;
“As
you know Monsieur Lenoir, this case is no longer the search for a missing
person, but it is now a murder case. I have here the results of the autopsy,
and it shows that your wife was strangled to death, probably with the use of a
belt. As nothing has been stolen from here, we are right now assuming that this
murder is linked to some kind of personal vengeance between your wife and the
murder. Do you know of anybody who might have a grudge against your wife, or
who would have the motive to get rid of her?”
“Absolutely
not! My wife had no enemies; she had no reason to have enemies. Her life was
simple and peaceful, and everybody loved her!” said Monsieur Lenoir with an
upset tone.
“Then
who would have an interest in having your wife dead?”
“I
don’t know, I cannot imagine anybody would want to kill her!”
“How did your wife go to her dance lessons?
Did you drive her there?”
“No;
she usually went on her own.”
“Have
you proposed to drive her to or from her dance lessons in the past months?”
“I
never proposed to drive her to the dance lessons, because I always got home
from work either just before she left for the lesson, or after she had already
left. I did however propose a few times to pick her up once she was done with
the lesson and even to take her out for dinner after it.”
“What
was her reaction to this proposal?”
“In
the past months, she would refuse, always politely.”
“What
did she say exactly?”
“She
would either tell me to relax because I had a long day at work, or she would
tell me that it’s her night out with the ladies, and that they would have a girl
time and girl talk.”
“How
did you react to that?”
“I
respected her personal space and her choice to spend time with her friends.”
Inspector
Leveuf took a last breath of his cigarette and put it off in the ashtray next
to him. He looked deeply towards Monsieur Lenoir and said;
“Monsieur
Lenoir, did you know that your wife has not been to her dance lessons for
several months?”
Monsieur
Lenoir looked surprised and with a hesitant voice said; “No, I had no idea, why
wouldn’t she? And where was she going all this time then?”
“That’s
why I would like you to tell me.”
“As
I said, I have no idea of that. I have always thought she was going to the
dance lessons and after that going out with her friends from the lesson for
dinner or a drink, as she always said.”
“As
I mentioned previously, we’ve found out from her dance school that she hasn’t
been there for several months now, not a single time. Have you ever considered
or noticed any indication that she might be cheating on you with a lover?”
“No!
I cannot imagine her ever doing that.” replied Monsieur Lenoir with an
emotional voice.
“Was
there, in any situation, the name of any guy mentioned in the past few months that
you did not know, or had not heard his name before?”
“No,
none; all the people she knew and talked to, I knew them and had met them at
least once before on different occasions.”
“Monsieur
Lenoir” said the inspector with a deep and serious voice, “where were you on the
night your wife disappeared between 9PM and 11PM?”
“I
was home.”
“Were
you with anybody or is there anybody who could support what you say?”
Monsieur
Lenoir looked shocked at the question, and with an aggressive tone replied; “I
was alone at home, so no, nobody can support my words! But I did not kill my
wife, if that is what you are trying to find out!”
“This
is a murder case Monsieur Lenoir, and we must investigate all the
possibilities. What time did you arrive home exactly on that day?”
“A
bit before half past six”
“So
you saw your wife before she left?”
“Yes,
I did.”
“Did
you talk?”
“Yes,
we did.”
“Can
you recall the conversation?”
“She
asked me how my day was. I said it was a very busy day but productive. She then
told me that dinner is ready and I can heat it up in the microwave. Then she
kissed me and left.”
“What
did you do after that?”
“I
changed, washed, heated up the meal and sat in front of the television. I
watched a movie while eating.”
“What
did you have for dinner?”
“Excuse
me?” replied Monsieur Lenoir with utter surprise at the question.
“What
was the meal you had? Can you remember?”
Monsieur
Lenoir struggled to remember and then said; “I had beans with white rice and
chicken breasts. No sorry, it was green Pease, not beans”
“What
did you watch?”
Monsieur
Lenoir looked nervous, he stared at the inspector and said; “What has that got
to do with the murder of my wife!?”
Inspector
Leveuf smiled and said “I am trying to draw the evening’s events so we can
understand better what happened. So, what movie did you watch?”
“I
watched Kill Bill.”
“Ah,
interesting movie; quite long, and bloody, no?”
Monsieur
Lenoir had a sarcastic smile on his face and said; “Yes, it’s about three hours
long, very bloody, but I do enjoy Tarantino movies.”
“What
time did the movie end?”
“Around
10PM.”
“And
what did you do after that?”
“I
went to sleep. I worked the next day from 8AM, so I needed to rest.”
“Very
well Monsieur Lenoir, thank you for coming. I will let you know if we need any
further information from you.”
Monsieur
Lenoir walked out the inspector’s office and Valerie walked in right after he
left.
“So
how did it go? You think he did it?” asked Valerie with excitement in her
voice.
“Difficult
to say; he seemed surprised at the fact that his wife had not been to the dance
lessons in the past months. He also claimed that there was no indication that
she cheated on him and he had no such suspicions.”
“You
think he is saying the truth?”
“I
don’t know. It’s still not clear in my mind.”
“Did
he tell you where he was at the time of death?” asked Valerie.
“He
was home. He arrived home before half past six, talked to his voice about his
day and the dinner she made for him. She left, and he then changed, had dinner
while watching Kill Bill, then went to bed after the movie, which ended around
10PM.”
“Yes,
I remember that movie was on television two weeks ago, I watched it. Quite
bloody I must say!” Valerie was silent for a moment, then she said; “So then he
was at home.”
“No
necessarily.” Said the Inspector; “he could have easily followed his wife, and
killed her when she left her lover’s home. All he needs is to know what movies
were on that evening, and what was prepared for dinner, and then he can make up
the story to cover up his crime.”
Valerie
thought for a moment about the inspector’s theory, then she handed him a paper
and said; “those are the details of the owner of the second number.”
*****
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May 9, 2013
Bloody Love (by Omar Kamal)...Part.2
The
inspector sat at his desk, checking the dead woman’s phone as Monseir Lenoir
walked into his office.
“Hello
inspector” said Monsieur Lenoir as he walked in accompanied by Valerie.
“Hello
Monsieur Lenoir, please have a seat, this will not be easy to hear” said the
inspector with a serious tone.
“What
happened? Have you found my wife?” asked Monsieur Lenoir with a worried voice.
“We
may have” replied the inspector, “Tell me sir, is this your wife’s phone? Can
you recognise it?” asked Inspector Leveuf as he handed the phone to the
husband.
“Yes,
it is hers. I recognise it from the picture on the background. It’s an old
picture from the time we first met, 17 years ago.”
“Very
well! Your wife received 31 missed calls, all within less than 24 hours, during
the time when you came and notified she had gone missing. All these calls were
from two numbers and two numbers only. Are any of them yours sir?” asked the
inspector as he handed Monsieur Lenoir a paper with two mobile numbers written
upon it.
“This
one is mine.” replied Monsieur Lenoir as he pointed out the first number
listed.
“Do
you recognise the other number?”
“Not
at all. Could you please explain to me what happened?” demanded Monsieur
Lenoir.
Inspector
Leveuf took a deep breath as he prepared himself to explain to the man the
events that led to this meeting.
“Monsieur
Lenoir, when you first came to us with your notification that your wife had
gone missing, we assumed it would be another case of a partner who had left
their spouse to run away with their lover. This theory became even stronger
when we discovered that your wife had not attended any of her dance classes for
the past three months!”
“What?
How is that possible!” interrupted Monsieur Lenoir with an air of utter
surprise.
“Please
Monsieur Lenoir” said the inspector, “allow me to continue my explanation of
the situation.” Inspector Leveuf lit a cigarette and took a deep breath, as he
exhaled, he continued with his explanation; “As I was saying, the dance school
confirmed that your wife had not attended any of her classes for the past three
months. This strengthened our belief that she had a lover, taking into
consideration that she continued to lie to you about her classes, and managed
to be gone for many consecutive hours. The dance classes and the friends she
had their seemed to be the perfect escape route to allow her to meet her lover,
without raising your suspicion.” The inspector took another puff of his
cigarette and went on to reveal the truth to the husband. “This morning sir, I
was about to pay you a visit to explain to you that your wife had run away with
another man, but just as I prepared to leave, my colleague Miss Carion, ran
hastily into my office, calling me to join her immediately. We went to the
scene of a supposed crime that would change our theory in this case entirely. There
we found the body of a woman, dropped into the sewers and left to decompose by
the elements of nature. The body was already in a state of decomposition with
rats and worms devouring its flesh. The hand bag that you see in front of you
here is the one we found next to the body. While searching it, we found the
phone that I handed you to check, and an ID card indicating the owner as Amelie
Lenoir.”
With
a shaken voice, the man looked at the inspector and asked; “Are you saying that
my wife has been dead for two weeks and was left in the sewer like a dead
rat!?”
Inspector
Leveuf saw the tears in the man’s eyes and couldn’t react. He never was skilled
with social behaviours, manners or any form of affectionate expressions. A
straight forward man, he could only say the things as they were. Valerie
approached the weeping husband and with a soft touch on his shoulder and her
comforting voice said; “Please do calm down Monsieur Lenoir. I understand this
must be difficult for you, but the task we need to ask you to do is very
important to determine whether or not the body we found is that of your wife.”
“Yes!”
said the inspector with a firm voice. “We need you to identify the body for us
Monsieur Lenoir.”
Monsieur
Lenoir turned his face towards the inspector, and with a helpless look in his
eyes and a weakened voice replied; “I will do whatever is needed of me
inspector.”
The
three stood by the side of the table where the body of the woman laid. The inspector
waited for a reaction from the husband, but all he could do was nod his head as
he stared at the dead woman.
“Is
this your wife?” asked the inspector.
“Yes.”
said Monsieur Lenoir in a low and weak voice.
“I
am sorry sir, I can barely hear you. What did you say?”
“Yes,
yes! This is my wife. This is my beloved Amelie. Oh God!” monsieur Lenoir burst
into tears.
“Monsieur
Lenoir, you can go home now. I advise you to try to get some rest tonight, as I
will need you tomorrow morning to continue the investigation. Can you be here
by 10AM?” asked the inspector.
“Yes
sir. I will be here.”
“Good.
You can go now sir. I am very sorry for your loss.”
“Thank
you. Goodnight inspector, goodnight Miss Carion.” The man turned around and
walked away.
“Goodnight
Monsieur Lenoir.” said Valerie.
“Goodnight
sir.” said the inspector. “Oh, Monsieur Lenoir!” the man turned around and
looked at the inspector; “Do not leave the country, or the city, for any
reason. I will need you here, close by.”
Monsieur
Lenoir walked away with his head bent down.
“Valerie,
close the missing person case. It is now a murder case. And send an undercover
24/7 patrol immediately to Monsieur Lenoir’s residence. If he tries to escape,
have him arrested.” said the inspector to his assistant.
“Do
you think he did it?” asked Valerie.
“I
do not know, but I will take no risk.”
*****
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May 8, 2013
Bloody Love (by Omar Kamal)...Part.1
Inspector
Jacques Leveuf sat sipping on his early morning coffee and enjoying his rolled
cigarette as he did at the start of each day, when he heard a knock at his
office door. Miss Valerie Carion walked in with her usual grace and beauty, but
her face had an expression of extreme boredom as she brought a paper to the
inspector’s desk.
“What
is this?” asked the inspector as he examined the paper she handed him.
Valerie
explained; “We received this morning a notification from a citizen named
François Lenoir. He claims that his wife has gone missing last night. She left
home at 7PM as usual, to attend her weekly dance class. She had the habit of
going out with her friends from the class once done, as per the husband’s
explanation, and would usually be home by 10 or 11PM latest, however last
night, she never got home, and until this morning there was no sign of her. He
tried calling her several times on her mobile phone, but without any answer.”
“Hmmm…she
probably ran off with her lover” replied the inspector. “Send a search team.
Check at her dancing school where they saw her last, and who was the last
person to talk to her. Find out if they know in which direction she left. Print
out a picture of her and send it to the main newspapers, let’s see if anybody
will react.”
The
hours passed and days passed; while the search team desperately tried to find
any trace of Madame Lenoir. The investigation at the dance school brought back
an interesting new twist to the case, as it turned out that Madame Lenoir had
not attended any of the classes for the past three months. Where had she been
going? Why did she stay out late? What was she doing? At this point, the
inspector was almost certain that Madame Lenoir had a lover. Could she have
truly run away with him?
*****
After
two weeks of failed attempts to solve the case of the missing wife, Inspector
Leveuf sat at his desk, preparing himself for the confrontation with the
husband; during which he would have to explain to him that his beloved wife
most probably ran away with her lover, and will not be coming back, when
suddenly Valerie ran into his office speaking breathlessly; “Inspector Leveuf,
you have to come with me! It’s horrible!” Inspector Leveuf didn’t bother to ask
for an explanation. He followed Valerie to the car and they drove off to one of
the ghettos of Paris. As they arrived on the main market, they found a huge
crowd gathered within one circle. The inspector and Valerie made their way
walking in between the crowd until they reach the police cars and ambulance
that surrounded an opening of the sewer system. The stench that came out of
that hole was beyond description! The inspector and Valerie had to cover their
noses and mouth to be able to remain standing in the area. Around them, all the
people had expressions of disgust and pain on their faces; some were even
vomiting on the side of the street. As the inspector approached the opening of
the sewer, he laid his eyes on a terrible sight. In the sewers laid the dead
body of a woman; in state of decomposition, surrounded by rats and covered by
worms eating its flesh. Valerie turned around and vomited on the spot. The
inspector ordered that the body be taken out and taken to the forensics
immediately.
As
the forensics examined the body, the inspector and Valerie searched the hand
bag that was found by the side of the woman. In the bag they found her make up
kit, a set of keys, migraine pills, a hand cream, a mobile phone and a purse.
“This mobile phone is dead” said the inspector, “find me a compatible charger,
I want to see what activities were done on it and when.” As Valerie searched
for a charger, the inspector examined the purse and noticed a picture of a man
that seemed vaguely familiar. It was an old picture in black and white of a
young man, not more than 20 years of age, but the features of the face seemed
so familiar to the inspector, he could have sworn he had met the man before. As
he examined the purse further, this familiarity became clear when he found the
ID card of the woman and read the name; Amelie Lenoir. Valerie walked in with
the charger, the inspector looked up to her and said; “Seems that we found the
missing wife.” The inspector handed the ID card to Valerie, “Oh God! It’s
Monsieur Lenoir’s wife!” she said with her eyes wide open. “Call him please”
said the inspector, “and tell him to come to the police station immediately.”
*****
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Black as midnight on a moonless night (by Omar Kamal)...Part.4
Three
days passed without a sign of the girl. A new week began, a new Monday early
start, but she appeared nowhere and there was no way to gather any further
information about her. Without a name or at least an address, it was impossible
to know who she is, and so impossible to stop her before she strikes again. And
so it was; as the inspector walked into the office that Monday, Valerie was
waiting for him with worried eyes. The inspector needed no explanation, he
understood; the killer had struck again.
Inspector
Leveuf made a sign to Valerie to come with him, they left the office directly
to the scene of the crime in a small street called Tiquetonne. The inspector
went immediately to ask the restaurants around if they knew the victim and if
they had seen him with a girl that fits the portrait he had in his hand.
Rapidly the inspector gathered the information from the Pizzeria in the street
where the victim was used to go, in the meantime, Valerie gathered information
from the database on his identity. The time was running and they needed to take
action before the trail got cold and another victim fell. As they walked back
into the office, they had successfully gathered enough information about their
new victim with one additional information that could dramatically change the course
of the case.
Valerie
briefed the inspector on her findings saying; “the victim, Benjamin Cohen, 29
years old, was from an upper middle class Jewish French family. He graduated
from journalism and found a job in a local Parisian newspaper. Although the
income was modest, he did enjoy the work very much, and managed his life mostly
from his share of the family business; a kosher restaurant where his father,
mother and brother worked. He lived in an apartment on his own, and is praised
by his colleagues, friends and family for being a lively, friendly and
energetic person. He is single and never married but has had several serious
relationships that just did not survive the daily difficulties.”
“Very
well Valerie” said the inspector. “I have asked in the area, the crime seems to
have been done in exactly the same way. The waitress in the Pizzeria confirmed
having seen Benjamin enter the place with the young girl, she even recognized
her from the sketch. They entered around six in the evening, had their food and
drinks, left again around ten. We will probably find that the autopsy will
confirm that the death took place between 11PM and 1AM, and that the cause of
death was arterial air embolism. However, this time she made one mistake; they
left with a taxi. I need you to find out which taxis had a shift in that area
at that time, get me the drivers and let’s find out where they went after the
Pizzeria.”
About
two hours later, Valerie entered the inspector’s office. “Sir, we found the
driver, a 50 years old man of Algerian origins, known as Hajj Taha. He
recognized the girl from the sketch and recognized the body. He picked them up
last night from Tiquetonne Street at about ten in the evening and drove them to
Rivolli Street; they got off in front of the optician shop there, which is at
number 114 in that street.”
“Excellent!”
screamed the inspector with joy. “Now I want you to check each and every single
person living on that block, track her down and find out who she is.”
Valerie
and her team worked on tracking down the identities of those living on that
block on Rivolli Street. In the meantime, the autopsy came about to confirm
that Benjamin Cohen was the third victim of this serial killer.
The
night kicked in and the clock was ticking when Valerie finally found the person
she was looking for. She ran into the inspector’s office screaming; “we found
her! We found her!”
“Excellent!
Who is she tell me?”
Valerie
started explaining; “her name is Elisabeth Dupon. She is 27 years old; her
picture fits the sketch we have perfectly. She studied pharmacology and
graduated only a year ago. She currently works part time in a family pharmacy
business. She is single and never married. Her father is Lionel Dupon who was
convicted 16 years ago with rape. Her mother, Isabelle Dupon, filed for a
divorce once her husband was convicted. The man entered into a deep depression
and committed suicide while in prison. Isabelle Dupon had to then take jobs as
a housemaid to finance her daughter’s studies. Apparently the woman suffered a
lot of abuse and harassment in her work, which culminated in a rape case 8
years ago. She didn’t succeed in proving her case; it seems the rapist was a
wealthy and powerful employer who managed somehow to get himself out of it and
then left the country after the scandal. Isabelle on the other hand, couldn’t
handle the pressure and the looks in people’s eyes; she also fell into
depression and committed suicide 5 years ago. Ever since, Elisabeth has been on
her own, with no families or friends.”
“Valerie”
said the inspector; “I can now confirm we have our killer. Her life experience
shows a psychological traumatism caused by the extreme lack of trust in men.
She has seen the closest man to her, her father, be convicted of rape, and the
closest woman to her, her mother, becoming a victim of rape, and not getting
justice. She obviously has a need for vengeance against men, especially young
men who are full of confidence and think they can get all the girls they want.
It is now five o’clock, we need to go to her building immediately; she might be
planning another murder tonight.”
Inspector
Leveuf, Valerie and two private officers arrived at the building at about half
past five, however when they asked around, they found out that Elisabeth had
already left her home. “We will have to wait here, hoping that she comes back
to her place” said the inspector.
The
hours passed as an eternity as the four waited in the car for Elisabeth to
appear. Then just as the clocked ticked half past ten, a car approached the
building and two people came out of it; a young handsome man, and Elisabeth.
Valerie reacted with the intention to jump out of the car to arrest her, but
the inspector stopped her saying; “we need to catch her red handed.”
*****
In
the building Elisabeth was seducing her new victim, Rachid Benzema. A handsome
brown man of Tunisian origins, well-built and well dressed; he had met
Elisabeth by coincidence three days before while shopping in a supermarket, and
couldn’t keep his eyes off her. She had noticed him, and right away started
smiling at him, until she eventually got him to ask her out.
While
in the elevator going up to her apartment, Elisabeth kissed Rachid passionately
as she glided her fingers over his fit body. She whispered in his ear gently
and he caressed her feminine curves with his strong hands. As they approached
the door of the apartment, Rachid could envision the night that would be ahead
of him; a beauty, a goddess would lay by his side and he would worship her
deliciously curvaceous body. Elisabeth too envisioned how her night would be as
she put the key into the door; another demon will be brought down, she thought.
As she opened the door, Rachid grabbed her from behind; “I can’t wait any
longer to have you” he told her. “Please Rachid my sweetheart; be patient, good
things come to those who wait. I will show you a night you will never forget;
but only if you wait” said Elisabeth gently. Rachid calmed down and sat over a
couch in the living room.
“Baby,
what would you like to drink?” asked Elisabeth.
“Some
whiskey will do sweetheart. Now come here with me a bit” replied Rachid.
Elisabeth
came back holding a glass of red wine and a glass of whiskey. She had changed
her clothes and was now wearing a black sleeping gown with such soft material
that when the light would dance behind it, one could see through it. Rachid saw
her coming towards him like that and felt he must be in heaven. She handed him
the whiskey, and with extreme enthusiasm, he drank the glass all at once. He
stood up and approached Elisabeth and grabbed her into his arms. “You are a
goddess of beauty Elisabeth” said Rachid as he looked her in the eyes and
kissed her. Suddenly; he started to feel strange, as if the world was turning
around, as if he were swept into a tornado.
“What’s
the matter my love? Are you ok?” asked Elisabeth.
“I
don’t know. I feel dizzy” replied Rachid.
She
helped him lay on the couch and within a couple of seconds the young man was in
a deep sleep. Elisabeth then ran into her room and picked the syringe. She
stood in front of Rachid as he slept deeply and whispered in anger; “I shall
fill your filthy male blood with air, paralyze your pervert man brain, and when
you’re gone, I shall cross out your black darkened heart that has no mercy for
the fragile women! I shall have our revenge!”
Just
as she raised her hand to stab Rachid into the artery with the syringe filled
with air, the door of the apartment burst open and Inspector Leveuf barged in
with his gun pointed at Elisabeth and screamed; “Freeze, you are under arrest.
Surrender or I will shoot you.”
Elisabeth
turned around and looked straight towards the inspector’s eyes. Her lips drew a
devilish smile of satisfaction. Never had the man seen such an angelic face
turn into such a demonic creature. She turned back suddenly and prepared to
stab her victim despite the warning.
A
gun shot.
She
fell.
*****
Inspector
Leveuf and Valerie walked out of the hospital after visiting Rachid who was now
recovering. The amount of sleeping powder was so high, it caused severe damage
to his brain, but he was still alive. The night had fallen and darkness reigned
over the city once again.
As
they walked away from the hospital building, Valerie asked; “Inspector, there
is one dilemma in this case that continues to intrigue me. How did she manage
to move the bodies?”
Inspector
Leveuf smiled and looked at Valerie explaining; “Remember the wheelchair we
found in her bedroom during the search?” Valerie nodded in agreement. “Well
Valerie, it seems that she used that chair to move the victims. After killing
them, she would close their eyes and mouths, making them look as invalid,
sleeping on the wheelchair, while she would transport them to her destination.
The task was even easier given the fact that the lift in her building well all
the way from in front of her apartment, to the ground floor directly. We also
found witnesses who confirmed having seen her with the wheelchair and claimed
to have though the victim to be an invalid sleeping and who she was driving
home.”
Valerie
shook her head and said; “Such a diabolic mind! How could somebody have so much
hate in them? How could she be capable of harming people so easily? She has
such a black and dark heart!”
Inspector
Leveuf looked up to the moonless night sky and said; “She doesn’t have a black
heart, neither do any of the guys who she killed. It is life that brings us to
this. It is life that breaks us apart and tares us into pieces, and makes us
become who we are. If life were a human being, it would have the darkest heart
of all, as black as midnight on a moonless night.”
Inspector
Leveuf lit a cigarette, and walked away into the distance.
THE END
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Jan 31, 2013
Black as midnight on a moonless night (by Omar Kamal)...Part.3
Once
they arrived on the scene of the crime, the inspector walked hastily towards
the body. It was another young man, this time 29 years of age; David Lachaise.
“Open
his shirt!” said the inspector to a police officer with a serious and
determined voice.
The
inspector’s mind could not absorb what he had just seen. On the chest of the
young man, the exact same X sign was marked at his heart. The inspector thus
came to the realisation that this was no longer a mere murder case; he was now
on the chase for a serial killer, whom he needed to stop before any further
victims fell.
“Send
the body to the laboratory for the autopsy immediately; we haven’t a minute to
loose!” said the inspector to the police officer. He then turned to Valerie and
said; “Valerie, I want you to gather every detail you can about this man. I
want to know everything about his life; private, professional, educational;
family. Everything!”
As
the night slowly set itself in, the inspector sat waiting impatiently the
result of the autopsy and Valerie’s research. He drifted away into his thoughts
as he tried to imagine what could the X mark possibly indicate, and how could
he stop this killer before striking again. A knock at the door awoke him from
his moment of mind drifting. The doctor came in and in his hand the report.
“Doctor,
please tell me, what have you found?”
“Well
inspector, it’s practically the same case. The man was 29 years old; the time
of death was once again between 11PM and 1AM. The same means of death, which I
suppose was induced by a syringe filled with air, into the artery. Once again;
we found some sleeping substance in his system, in addition to consumption of
alcohol in relatively high amounts. As for the X mark, it is done in exactly
the same manner, most probably even with the same knife, as the depth of the
wound, and its width, are the same.”
“Have
you found any signs of any sexual activity from that night on the body?”
“None
whatsoever sir” replied the doctor.
The
inspector thanked the doctor for his report, and just as the man left the
office room, Valerie walked in with the result of her research.
“Ah
Valerie, just the person I needed to see. Please enlighten me with the results
of your research.”
“Inspector,
I have gathered all the information I could get from the system, and I
questioned the flatmate, and here is what I know about our victim. David
Lachaise comes from a middle class family; he was raised to be independent and
self-sufficient. He studied medicine and was working in the same time while
studying to finance his living. Upon graduation, he managed to find a job as an
assistant in a private practice in town, where he was working until now. He is
a hard working young man, and everybody in the practice praises him for his
devotion and intelligence. In his private life; he seems to be very easy to
live with, according to his flatmate; he is very well organized and clean, and
very respectful of personal space. He is single and was never married. His
flatmate claims that despite having had many relationships, David never passed
the threshold of six months with any girl. It seems he is frightened of the
idea of commitment.”
The
inspector stood up and walked around the office as he lit a cigarette, and
said; “this is quite interesting. We have two victims of different social and
educational backgrounds, but both are successful in their professional lives
and manage to live well it seems out of their jobs. Yet both of them are
unstable in their emotional life, but they are not necessarily victims of
heartbreaks, they are rather unable to commit. But where does that lead us with
knowing who the killer is and why do they murder them? And what is that X mark?”
A
moment of silence passed, which seemed to Valerie as an eternity as she watched
the inspector dive into his thoughts. Suddenly, the inspector turned towards
her and said; “Valerie, I want you to find out the favourite places where those
two young men hung out; their favourite bar, coffee shop, restaurant, club,
anything. And I want to know if they have been to any of them on the night of
the murder, and if yes, were they with someone.”
Hours
passed as Valerie researched; questioned and gathered information from all
corners and all sides. She had not remembered a single case where she had
worked this much, but most importantly, she could not remember a single case
that the inspector was so enthusiastic to resolve as this one. Despite the
tragedy of the murders, it seemed the inspector was happier than he had ever
been. As if the challenge of cracking a case was the fuel for his life, the
source of satisfaction and energy to move forward. He was as a new born man.
As
the inspector walked into the office the next morning, Valerie intercepted him
to brief him with the information she succeeded in gathering.
“Good
morning Valerie, tell me what have you found?”
“Sir,
I have found the favourite places of the two young men. Our first victim,
Jeremy, was a regular of a brasserie in Neuilly called Chez Marcel. He was seen
entering there on the night of his death at about six in the evening with a
young lady. The lady is described as about 165cm tall, shoulder length brunette
wavy hair, fair white skin and in her mid-twenties. I had a sketch made of her
portrait if you would like to see it” Valerie handed the inspector the sketch
and continued explaining; “they were then seen leaving the brasserie together
sometime before ten in the evening. They were also seen hoping in his car, a
Mini Cooper S, and leave the area. This same car was found on the scene of the
crime in Neuilly, we identified the license plaque, and it is confirmed to be
the victim’s car.”
“Very
well, and for the second victim” asked the inspector.
“David
Lachaise’s favourite place was an Italian restaurant in Saint Michel called
Bella Napoli. He went there at least once a week, sometimes more. On the night
of his death, he was seen walking in with a young girl; her description fits
exactly the description of the girl who was with the first victim. They also
arrived at the restaurant at about six in the evening and left a bit before
ten. But it seems in this case they took the metro, but we do not know where
they got off.”
Inspector
Leveuf sat down at his desk and rolled a cigarette in absolute silence. Valerie
stood there awaiting comments or instructions, but no words came out of the
inspector’s mouth. He lay back on his chair, lit his cigarette and took a first
puff. As he blew the smoke out, his eyes drifted up to the ceiling as if
following the ascending smoke. The silence was finally broken as the inspector
looked at Valerie and said; “All the indications seem to point out at that
young girl as the potential killer. It is too much of a coincidence for her to
be seen with both victims in both crime scenes two nights in a raw. In addition
to that, the means of killing seems to fit a female killer. It would be very
difficult for a girl with this description to struggle with fit young men like
our two victims.”
The
inspector took another puff of his cigarette, got up from his chair and started
walking around the office while explaining:
“I
believe that the crime most probably happened in this way; the young girl
somehow meets the victim somewhere some days before, they look at one another,
she attracts his attention, they flirt a bit. Eventually she gets a date with
him. As most men, he will take her to his favourite place, to share with her
the moment, but also to show off his new conquest in a familiar space where
people know him. They sit, they eat, maybe drink some wine. After more than
three hours spent in that place, they move; possibly to his place, maybe to her
place. I would assume to her place, where she can feel more comfortable to get
to the act. The autopsy proved that no sexual action was taken during the
nights of the murder, in other words, our killer did not let herself go with
the young men. She probably takes them to her place, offers an additional
drink, in which she slips some sleeping pill or powder. The victim drinks and
immediately falls into a deep sleep. Once she is sure that the young man is
asleep, she injects his artery in the neck with a large syringe filled with
air; death is immediate. She then undresses the victim, gently carves the X on
the chest at the heart, then puts his clothes back on and carries the body and
leaves it where we found the victim.”
The
inspector walked towards the window in his office and watched the streets
outside as the cars drifted back and forth in absolute urban frenzy. He turned
to Valerie and said; “Our mission now is to identify this girl before she
strikes again. We don’t know much about who she is, so we need to somehow track
her down. I want double patrols all around town, and I want tripled patrols in
Neuilly and Saint Michel; she might decide to revisit the scene.”
Inspector
Leveuf sat and smoked another cigarette. He looked at the sketch of the killer
and wondered to himself; how could such an innocent and sweet looking girl
become such a brutal killer? What happened in her life that led her to this
vengeful mentality? The inspector couldn’t even imagine an answer, but he knew
that time would bring the answers to him as the case unravelled itself.
*****
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Black as midnight on a moonless night (by Omar Kamal)...Part.2
Valerie
walked into her office the next morning around seven as per her usual schedule.
She was full of energy and ready to work on cracking this mysterious case. As
she walked towards her office room, she passed in front of Inspector Leveuf’s
office and noticed the lights were on. She walked slowly towards the office,
preparing her gun in case there was an intruder as she knew that Inspector
Leveuf never came before nine by any means! She opened the door and aimed her
gun as she walked in. “Inspector Leveuf! You scared me! What are you doing here
so early?”
Inspector
Leveuf looked at Valerie and with a smile that she had never seen before said:
“Oh why good morning Valerie! I trust you had a good night sleep? I have been
here since 6AM trying to get some additional information on our victim.”
“Any
success?” wondered Valerie.
“Of course, sit down I will make you a coffee and tell you what I found out about him.” said the inspector.
“Of course, sit down I will make you a coffee and tell you what I found out about him.” said the inspector.
“Here
you go” said the inspector as he handed the coffee to Valerie and went on
explaining: “our victim, Jeremy Deschamps, comes from a well off family. His
father was a judge, and he himself studied law and graduated nine years ago, at
which point with the help of his family, he opened his private practice with
two of his university friends. The practice seems to be going quite well as
they each specialise in a different area of cases; Jeremy himself specialises
in divorce cases. He is single and never married. He does seem to be a bad boy
though, or at least use to be; at age 19 he was arrested for illegal possession
and use of marijuana, but thanks to the intervention of his father, he ended up
only paying a fine. I have already asked for his colleagues from the practice
to come over to the office so we can get some additional information.”
“This
is quite impressive inspector. I didn’t think this case would interest you that
much.” said Valerie in a surprised tone.
Inspector
Leveuf smiled and told her; “I am just doing my job my dear.”
About
an hour later, a man presented himself at Inspector Leveuf’s office. He was
introduced as the partner of Jeremy, Ismail Diouf; a young French man of
Senegalese origins. Inspector Leveuf welcomed him in and offered him a seat and
a refreshment to calm the man’s nerves down. It was obvious from the young
man’s face that the issue was too much for him to handle, but the inspector
needed him as calm as possible so that he can manage to get the information he
needs out of him.
“So
tell me Mister Diouf, how was your colleague Jeremy at work, both on the
professional and personal level?” asked the inspector in a stable and determined
tone.
Ismail
sipped on his drink and tried to gather his thoughts as he answered the
question:
“Well,
on the personal level, Jeremy was always a light spirit. He would always make
us laugh and lighten up the atmosphere, even when the situation in the practice
became quite tense due to complicated cases and daily work stress. But despite
this light spirit, he still took his work very seriously and devoted himself to
the furthest extent when working on a case.”
“Did
he get very many cases?” asked the inspector.
“He
did yes; he actually had the most cases of us all. Divorce is quite a common
thing nowadays.”
“Were
his clients mostly men or women, or both equally?”
“He
did have some male clients, but the overwhelming majority of his clients were
women filing for a divorce.”
“Very
well. What age range were these women?”
“There
were some middle aged women, but the majority were young women under their
thirties. Quite beautiful ladies too.”
“Ah,
that is interesting” exclaimed the inspector; “What was Jeremy like with women?
Was he somewhat of a playboy?”
“Very
much so sir. He was always very popular among the women since we were in
university. He never had any trouble to get the girl he wanted. He almost didn't even need to try.”
“Did
he have a girlfriend that we could possibly contact and get more information?”
“No
sir. Jeremy was single. He did not believe in commitment or even marriage for
that matter. Ever since we started with the practice, he lost faith in
commitment and has not had a single stable relationship in the past years. He
just spends his time jumping from one adventure to the next.”
“What
about his clients? Has he had any affairs with any of them?”
“I
believe he may have had a few, sir, but I am not sure. He had so many stories
and adventures in the past years, it was difficult to follow.”
“What
about your other colleague, where is he?”
“François,
he is out of the country sir, on vacation. He will be back in two weeks.”
“One
last question Mister Diouf, do you know of any enemies Jeremy may have? Anybody
who would wanted to see him dead?”
“No
sir, Jeremy never had any enemies. He is very careful in his relations with
people and has always been very respectful.”
“Very
well Mister Diouf, that will be all for now” said the inspector with a smile;
“if we would need anything further, I will let you know. And I am very sorry
for your loss; we will do our best to solve this case catch the perpetrator.”
As
Inspector Leveuf walked towards his office room after seeing the young Ismail
out, Valerie dashed towards him with her usual energy.
“Sir,
we have another dead body, this time in Saint Michel.”
The
inspector’s eyes opened wide; “let’s go Valerie. There is no time to waste!”
*****
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