Jan 8, 2013

Black as midnight on a moonless night (by Omar Kamal)...Part.1


Sitting behind his wooden desk and a pile of papers in his Paris office, Inspector Jacques Leveuf lit his early morning cigarette which he had the habit of smoking with his coffee to start his day. No food or nutrition was needed in this man’s morning; the sole rolled cigarette and the well prepared espresso were enough to put him back on track to crack the toughest mysteries and roughest cases the police would meet. But the past months had been a sequence of eternal boredom for Inspector Leveuf as no “juicy cases” as he described them had come to his office lately, but this winter Monday was like no other, for on this day, all would turn around.
As Inspector Leveuf sipped on his last drop of espresso and enjoyed the last puff of his cigarette, his assistant, Miss Valerie Carion came rushing into the office. Valerie was a young and beautiful girl from the small town of Aix-en-Provence. Small in size but strong in personality; her baby face and small blonde curls gave an innocent look that hid an imposing and determined character. A very ambitious girl, she had great success in her university and later her professional career which led her to rapidly reach the post of assistant inspector in Paris. But despite her high intelligence and ambitions, Inspector Leveuf still believed that she was an overly excited young girl who expected too much out of her job.
“Inspector; you must come quickly” cried the young girl with immense energy.
With his usual calm and serenity, Inspector Leveuf asked Valerie to calm down and sit to explain what is going on exactly. He did not expect her to surprise him or impress him with the case she had in hand as he had grown accustomed to her overreaction on every event and suspected that this time was no different than all the previous ones.
In her continued excitement, Valerie explained to the inspector that the body of a young man was found dead in the early morning in the area of Neuilly. She explained that no signs of any struggle or injuries were visible on the body and that no eye witness saw any events related to this death during the night. All the residents of the area claimed that it was a calm night and no noise was heard at any moment that would indicate any fight or accident had taken place.
“The young man may have died from natural causes. Possibly a heart attack from drugs or anything of the sort” answered the inspector in a calm and uninterested voice.
“That is true sir, but don’t you think we should check it, there might be more to it than it seems” replied Valerie in her continued enthusiasm for the case.
After discussion, Inspector Leveuf finally agreed to go down to the crime scene and take care of the investigation.

Rushing through the streets of Paris, the two finally arrived at the crime scene. Inspector Leveuf got a briefing of the information gathered until this point. The young man’s name was Jeremy Deschamps. A handsome young man of 31 years of age, he worked as a lawyer in a private practice with two colleagues, one of them identified the body to the police. Inspector Leveuf rolled a cigarette while he watched the ambulance carry the body to move it to the laboratory for examination. His mind continued to drift away, wondering until when he could keep the patience in this job where no new events take place, where excitement flies out the window like a young bird flying free of its nest. He continued to believe that the autopsy would reach the conclusion that the young man died of natural causes, and the case would be closed as hundreds others that have passed casually in front if the inspector’s eyes.
The hours of the day passed as if years, Inspector Leveuf felt he was getting older and older with every tick of the clock. Just as he prepared himself to leave his office and go back home, Valerie came rushing into his office with a look on her eyes he had never seen before. For the first time since she had started working with him, he saw in her eyes a mixture of fear and surprise. Her face looked as if she had seen the face of God himself. Unable to hold back his enthusiasm to such a look, Inspector Leveuf grabbed Valerie from the shoulders and shook her while asking her: “what is the matter Valerie? What happened?”
Out of breath, Valerie struggled to form her sentence: “autopsy result…must see…quickly!”

Inspector Leveuf and Valerie rushed down to the laboratory to see the autopsy result. As they entered the room and approached the doctor who was standing next to the body, Inspector Leveuf could not believe his eyes. On the body, carved on the chest of the young man, right at the heart, was the letter X. What did that mean? How did it get there? Why was it done? Hundreds of questions raced through the inspector’s head like a buffalo stampede. He could not make heads or tails out of it. As he listened to the doctor’s report, he could not take his eyes off the X mark.
The doctor explained; “the man, 31 years old, died sometime between 11PM and 1AM. The cause of death is arterial air embolism in quite large amount. We found traces of a sleeping substance, probably administered through a drink. We do not know at this point if the sleeping substance was self-administered or not, but there was traces of alcohol consumption as well, in relatively large amount, so he may have been with people drinking during the evening. The X mark was made with a very sharp and small knife, probably a kitchen knife. It was carefully done so as not to cut too deep, which is why there wasn’t much blood flow”
“Was his shirt torn?” asked the inspector.
“Excuse me sir?” replied the doctor.
The inspector turned and looked towards the doctor, repeating his question; “was the shirt torn at the area of the X mark or not?”
“No sir, the shirt was absolutely intact” explained the doctor.
Intrigued by what he just saw, Inspector Leveuf walked out of the laboratory, thoughtful and lost. He turned to Valerie, and with a determined voice he said; “Valerie, this case is now officially a murder case. I will see you early tomorrow morning. Go home and get some rest, we are going to have a lot of work in the morning. Goodnight.”

*****

Black as midnight on a moonless night…Intro

In one of my strange evening, I was challenged by a friend of mine to write a story within only 8 hours. I was given 5 headline sentences, based on which I would imagine and create a whole story  I chose the sentence saying "Black as midnight on a moonless night" as it seemed to me the most intriguing and most inspiring sentence of all those given to me. I sat and start preparing my story; creating the characters  the plot and the full scenario, and by the early morning, I had written a short detective story which I will be sharing with you in the coming posts.




Jan 1, 2013

The Night


As the sun bids us farewell with its rays caressing our face
The night comes slowly along and takes its place
The moon rises and shines bright in the darkened sky
Like a woman in her full beauty, with her sweet smile she catches your eye
The glowing stars scatter above our heads
Like the warm blankets laying silently upon our beds
As the maniac city calmly goes to sleep
A creative army marches in the night so deep
In the darkness, their vision awakens
Their hearts run, their souls are free and their minds shaken
Sounds, images, gestures, and a flood of words
Fill the silence like migrating flocks of birds
Wisdom flows on the still ground of the land
Water shakes, trees dance and their rhythm beats on the sand
The night is young, and their minds float in it
They move, they shake, they jump, they cannot sit
The creative army gently marches by your side
The night comes to an end, but tomorrow once again they shall ride.
 

 

Sep 11, 2012

Who am I?

You sit in front of me
You ask who am I?
Dreaded by the question of who to be
I look you deep in the eye
I am the East
I am the West
I celebrate the feast
I get lost in my quest
Ever since my birth
Until the day I die
I roam the edges of the Earth
I swim, I crawl, I run, I fly
I search from end to end
Desperately Looking for a face
I fall and bend
But can't find my place
Surrounded by my people
I am nothing but a stranger
Lost in a haystack as a needle
Their looks see in me the danger
From the land of the Nile
To the Old Continent
Running for a mile
But I can't repent
You ask me who am I?
For you, I have no answering words
No explanation to know why
I'm nothing but a lost migrating bird.
 
11/09/2012

 

Sep 7, 2012

The Wrath of The Déluge

As I walked through the hallways of The Louvre Museum, my eyes came across a painting that inspired me with its strength and expression. I have rarely seen paintings with religious themes that were this inspiring, as they often touch to the same topics in quite standard ways. But this one did not fail to inspire me and bewilder me with the expressions on the faces and the movements in this painting. I could literally feel the pain and fear of the people depicted in the events of the great flood of Noah. The painting, shown below, is called Le Déluge, by Girodet de Roussy, and the text that follows it is the poem that I was inspired to write as I watched this work of art.


The Wrath of The Déluge

The grey clouds gather, blotting the sun out of sight
Thunder crackles and breaks the silence with its electric light
Drops of water gently pour on the faces of those who await
Their proud heads held high have brought them to their ill fate
The rain pours on the land with unprecedented rage
Bringing about yet another disastrous Human page
The water rises and the waves slap bodies back and forth
Desperate cries fly out of the people to the skies up north
On the rocks of the elevating mighty mountains
A man carries his elderly father away from the raging fountains
As he grabs on the branches of a dying tree
He hears his woman and children's desperate plea
In a final and hopeless attempt to save his loved ones
He reaches to the hand of his beloved, carrying their weeping sons
Facing the anger and wrath of the sky
No man power can save those destined to die
As the merciful brings the human race down to its knees
No ears can hear or understand their hopeless pleas
By the rocks of the still mountain the waves gently settle
Carrying the man who has finally lost his battle.